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Wingless General by ~Yasar:iconYasar:

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The blood of my men a guilt I bear,
Trees merry with laughter as I die.
My only wish, to escape them,
The only way, through the sky.

And as I walk through solemn woods,
No warriors left to raise a cry.
Once thundering blades now hollow thuds,
And I have no wings with which to fly.
©2005-2009 ~Yasar
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Author's Comments

A poem I wrote when I could not sleep last night. Upon looking at it without bleary eyes, I see a few flaws, and some things that I could've done better but.....meh.

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~Entrpy Aug 10, 2005, 4:17:39 PM
Mmm...Deep. It reminds me of the great sagas of old, about Vikings and Gods and such. Very good, I like it.

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~Yasar Aug 17, 2005, 6:42:02 AM
Thanks for your comment

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I get a kick out of being an outsider constantly. It allows me to be creative. I don't like anything in the mainstream and they don't like me. --Bill Hicks
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~Entrpy Aug 17, 2005, 8:32:07 AM
Thanks for commenting on my comment.

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~preysonwolvesforfun9 Sep 9, 2005, 7:36:53 AM
It reminds me of something. . . .

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We are here to stay
Better be nice
Because we have hell of a bite!
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~Yasar Sep 13, 2005, 7:10:54 AM
Something good I hope... ;)

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I get a kick out of being an outsider constantly. It allows me to be creative. I don't like anything in the mainstream and they don't like me. --Bill Hicks
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~preysonwolvesforfun9 Sep 13, 2005, 7:33:51 AM
Yes,yes. I still cant remember what.

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We are here to stay
Better be nice
Because we have hell of a bite!
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~michealvickers Sep 21, 2005, 4:50:50 AM
Hi Yas
This is so much bollocks
I want to just shit straight on the computer screen
It's me michael
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~bohemian-kisses Nov 28, 2005, 6:50:05 AM
Short. To the point. Very poetic and meaningful. I love it :)

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~LyraAlluse Dec 2, 2005, 5:28:42 PM
Nice peice! I like the flow of the poem. Nice imagery...great rythm. Keep up the good work!

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